This is my final draft assignment. My professor put note like this. Minyoung, t – graduate researcher

This is my final draft assignment. My professor put note like this.
Minyoung, this is a great start. You need to come up with 3 policy options – what you have are not written as such. Policy options should be rooted in law or regulation – I’ll also accept changes to federal guidelines. Also – I cannot tell what organization you are writing for in this paper. Please identify that within the first couple of sections. Also – your citations / reference page is not formatted in any way that I recognize. The easiest ways are APA or AMA. You have to use in-text citations – they are minimal in your paper, and not formatted correctly. Remember that this will be checked by Turn it In, and I do check each match. Make sure you are paraphrasing and citing.
I also put my final presentation which i used before. Most likely, my powerpoint is my final draft. So Use this please.
Let me know if you need to more info 🙂